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May 19th, 2011, 4:06 am

Yuri love story

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Shinigami_Shimai,

May 19th, 2011, 4:06 am

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Finally finished This has been a nightmare to work on although readers won't notice why. Here is the reason this page made me artless for a month. Originally this page had Yui continuing to talk about Hitomi and go on about her singing. When she is finished Hitomi said that she was embarrassed and that her singing didn't have that kind of effect on people. At that moment Ayumi sprung forth to declare that what Yui stated was the truth.

The thing is the dialogue I had written for Yui was bothering me to no end and I just couldn't figure out what was wrong. I tried everything I could from rewriting the page to rearranging the panels. Finally the other week I realized what was wrong is that Yui doesn't talk about Hitomi's singing in that way. It was actually Ayumi's words coming out of Yui's mouth. So I was stuck with how to change things around so that Ayumi took Yui's place.

Considering I have 10 pages ofter this already scanned and awaiting inking and toning I had to be careful what I did or I would end up having to rework everything. So I needed to keep things within this page or add in another. Finally I figured things out and added in the little bit about Yui's comments sounding like a dating column.

Well enjoy. That is enough from me tonight. I've been at this since 3 pm and it is now 5 am... *sighs* Hopefully I'll be able to get this chapter finished soon because I planned to be well beyond this by this time.

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SapphireSophilia,

May 19th, 2011, 6:48 am

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*happy squeal* ayu was paying speical attention to hitomi ^_^

*le gasp* a new challenger appears!!!

renchikolul,

May 19th, 2011, 5:51 pm

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Wow i like the touch that Ayumi her formal friend/love interest steps in to talk about Hitomi singing. Nice save

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